Ciara put together the presentation for our crit, going though the proces of what we had done so far, including the animatic she'd done.
We received a lot of feedback from the interim crit. Two of the main things were the characters and the environment.
With the character it was suggested that Ciara's character should be smaller, so there is a clear view that she is the younger sibling. Also as I had said and included in my developing design for the girl, her head was too big for her body. Her eyes should be a bit bigger to get arose her innocence and age, and it was said her limb should be thicker too, as they were hard to see with the background.
The male character I did, it was suggested that make him more stylised like the girl character, and I should exaggerated his shoulders more and make his head slightly smaller. Something I noticed it that my character has different colour eyes to Ciara's character so this also needs to be adjusted.
With the environment, it was said that we should start in the tent already to save designing a complex background of the busy fair ground. It was also pointed out that fair grounds are busy, so how would we create the busy atmosphere? a way we could do this is with sound or add in some 2d blurred background characters in some shots.
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