Responsive - crit

We had our first crit with the illustration students, and I really enjoyed walking round to see what everyone had done. However when walking round and seeing how the illustation students had presented their work, I saterted to worry that they wouldn't understand my outcomes (as this was the only thing I had printed off) 

Learning for the illustasion students, in future I will print: a quick summary of the breif I had, some of my process designs and then the final outcome. As this is how I understood some of their work better 






Most of the feed back I got was really good and helpful, such as:

- 'The blurb would be easier to make out if it was white'
- 'maybe experiment with shaddow' 

it was mentioned that the quialty of the quilling images weren't that great, but this was beacuse of the printer, that made grey look green and i really wasn't happy with how they looked printed. 

but the people who gave feed back, really like that I'd working in paper, and that I'd created texture and a 3d look in both of my briefs.

I did go back and changed the blurb text to white and think it looks more legible now.