Animated Documentary - new script and storyboard

After our feedback from tutors, we set out to cut out some characters, as we were told we had too many. We decided to cut the farmer chickens and cow as it was said the farmer wasn't needed and the animals didn't have a lot to say further.

Ciara went off to do the new script and I would then do the new storyboard. After the script was done, we recored the voice over, so that I could add the pauses etc into the storyboard. 

When recording, we had our actors and ourselves read out the script line by line, as it's easier to take out pauses than put them in. We also tried to read it slightly different each time, or if we could't get it right, do it until it was. So we have 2-4 recording of each line to pick from.

Now I need to put the speach and storyboard images into an animatic for crit on Monday.