Animated Documentary - Crit feedback

The main feedback we got was for our Audio 

It was said that some points sounded too scripted, they said the newts and sheep didn't sound genuine, where as I thought they (the sheep espesially) were perfect, the newt sounding relaxed. My concern was the bird, as I wanted to re do this anyway. 

They asked if we would have music, but then it was said that with music it would sound too busy, didn't need it, the sound effects we have now is fine.

Using beads for eyes would make life so much easier for us 

We couldn't find right size so said we would just created a few and replace them like the mouths, but we could also then create with some milliput or something and use that.

I think we may need to just go over some parts of the script,we were discussing earlier that becuase we recored in the sudio, and some at home on our phone, we both thought the recording boot audio sounded too sharp and clear, we both prefered the phone recordings as it's more realistic that we recored them in their own envioment of their home.

So now, becuase it sounded too scripted, we're going adjust the script slightly to the persons speach, 

For example

Ciara's mum wouln't say "yeah that’s the one, climate change. all of this happens because of that, all of these floods and stuff. pretty bad aint it? can’t image the world in a hundred years, ey, can you?"

But would say it like this

Yeah that’s the one, climate change. it's because of that, all of these floods and storms. ah sure, what can you do?can’t image the world in a hundred years, can you?

And with Declan he'd say 

"(Yawning) pff, bit hot int it love?" 

"Mmm I like it though, relaxing"

And 'Mmm oright love. All these rising temperatures though, it's all true, but it does mean we don't 'ave to travel down south for the heat, ha, can just stay ere!"

So hopefully not it's sound more relaxed and off the tounge