Visual language comments

These are the comments I received from peers when we looked at each others work. 

The main comments was that there could be more colour in my drawing, which yeah would make them look more appealing.  

Also more media could have been used, I thought I did use a range of media to find one i liked working in, but I suppose there are more materials I could have used for a wider use of media. 

Overall I received good comments, but from looking at others sketchbooks, I could have done more drawings of different perspectives (of the same object) and used more colour and media when doing my 8 drawings.