Final crit

Showing my work in the final crit gave me some good point and some points I can improve on. Some positive feed back for the Discovery Channel ident was that the textured paper on the layers were nice, the fish work really nice and they flow really well. Some things that I could do to improve this ident would be to have the plants on the first layer, sway in some way and it was said that I could add more underwater effects but I don’t really think it need things like bubbles. A simple sway of the plants would just add to the simplicity off the whole thing.

With the E4 idents one good comment I received was that it was well lit, the set is meant to be on a window sill and it was said if I can add that aspect of it in then it will look better. I think it’ll be difficult to do as everything is in one photo. So I can't really go back and fix it without redoing the whole thing.